(version 1)
with edits.
The edits
include new sections 5.1 and 5.2. This is the text
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In addition
some text from section 5 has been removed as it has
been
superseded by
the text in sections 5.1 and 5.2.
The new text
is also included below for reference.
NOTE: There
were other suggestions that are not included in this
update. I
would like to defer discussion of any other updates
until after
this change
is adopted unless you think the acceptance of this
change
is dependent
on one or more of the other suggested changes.
"5.1 Expedited
Performance Report
In the event there is a requirement to complete an
expedited review, the NRO EC chair will advise the
Review Committee chairs of the requirement.
5.2 Community Feedback
The Review Committee members are expected to be
engaged with their respective RIR communities during
their term. They should communicate relevant
developments relating to the Committee to their
respective community, and collect feedback relevant to
the IANA Numbering Services Operations from their
respective community. This input will be provided to
the RIRs as advice when appropriate. These comments
will be reviewed and summarized by the Review
Committee and included in the IANA Numbering Services
Operations Performance Report."
The removed
section 5 text is as follows:
"The Review
Committee members are responsible to make sure their
respective communities are informed about the comment
period, using their region’s relevant communication
and announcement channels. Following the closure of
the public comment, the Review Committee gathers input
and comments from the five RIR communities, which it
reviews and summarises. The Review Committee compiles
a final report on the review matrix, with the
summarised input appended, which it publishes and
submits to the NRO EC as advice."