Dear All
I have made 2 edits subject to your agreement -
Hyperlink in Section 3.2 and 2nd line in Section 5 . I enabled change control in the doc and the changes are in red. Document with revision is attached.
I have a conflicting project meeting this afternoon and therefore will not be able to join the call. Please accept my sincere apologies in this regard.
Regards
Madhvi
On 14/03/2022 02:46, Martin Hannigan wrote:
All I took a final pass at cleaning the doc up. I encourage everyone to review and comment. There is still time to make requested adjustments.
On Fri, Mar 11, 2022 at 2:22 PM Martin Hannigan <hannigan@gmail.com> wrote:
Great. This fixed the issue.
I've attached an updated markup 2.2 and a clean version. I invite everyones attention to the conclusion section.
Warm regards,
On Fri, Mar 11, 2022 at 1:16 PM Laureana Pavon <laureana@lacnic.net> wrote:
_______________________________________________Dear all,Please find attached the latest version of the document (redline), which includes the two comments Martin mentions plus a few minor editorial changes.All the links have been checked.Best,Laureana
On 3/11/2022 3:13 PM, Martin Hannigan wrote:
German,
Did you get notification of two comments? The changes made appear to be lost and want to confirm if you can see them or not. If you can see the questions I tagged you in that should be our working version.
Thanks
On Fri, Mar 11, 2022 at 12:19 PM Ernesto Majó <ernesto@lacnic.net> wrote:
_______________________________________________Thanks John, It looks good to me.
Ernesto
El 11/3/22 a las 12:35, John Sweeting escribió:
All, please find attached a copy of the matrix with white space removed. Please let me know if we need any other edits on this one. Thanks.
From: Tommy Baldwin <tbaldwin@arin.net>
Date: Friday, March 11, 2022 at 10:03 AM
To: John Sweeting <jsweeting@arin.net>, Hollis Kara <hollisk@arin.net>
Subject: Re: [IANA-RC] 2021 IANA Perfomance Matrix Summary Report
From: John Sweeting <jsweeting@arin.net>
Date: Thursday, March 10, 2022 at 10:37 AM
To: Hollis Kara <hollisk@arin.net>, Tommy Baldwin <tbaldwin@arin.net>
Subject: Re: [IANA-RC] 2021 IANA Perfomance Matrix Summary Report
Do you or Tommy have any other ideas pending Marty’s response to this one?
Thanks
From: Hollis Kara <hollisk@arin.net>
Date: Thursday, March 10, 2022 at 8:02 AM
To: John Sweeting <jsweeting@arin.net>, Tommy Baldwin <tbaldwin@arin.net>
Subject: Re: [IANA-RC] 2021 IANA Perfomance Matrix Summary Report
John,
It appears that in the Summary Report, German cut and paste the entirety of the matrix PDF, which is scaled to print on a Standard 8x11 page. Is it acceptable to simply add an image of the tables themselves without the header and footer? It makes the text a bit larger and easier to read. I am sure Tommy can get a cleaner version of the image, but I wanted to show you what I meant to see if it would be an acceptable solution.
Thanks,
Hollis
From: John Sweeting <jsweeting@arin.net>
Date: Thursday, March 10, 2022 at 7:30 AM
To: Tommy Baldwin <tbaldwin@arin.net>, Hollis Kara <hollisk@arin.net>
Subject: FW: [IANA-RC] 2021 IANA Perfomance Matrix Summary Report
Here is the report with the matrix added in, what they didn’t like is all the white space on that page for the matrix and would like to have it removed so that the bottom footer on that page is not so far removed from the last bit of text. Again let me know if you need anything further. Thanks.
From: Rc <rc-bounces@nro.net> on behalf of German Valdez <german@apnic.net>
Date: Thursday, March 10, 2022 at 4:00 AM
To: Martin Hannigan <hannigan@gmail.com>
Cc: "rc@nro.net" <rc@nro.net>
Subject: Re: [IANA-RC] 2021 IANA Perfomance Matrix Summary Report
Hi Martin and RC
I’m attaching a new version with changes control activated so it’s clear what is updated:
- RIR Members
- All URLs are verified, (some are now shorter URLs)
- Some changes based on the three transactions between IANA and the RIRs
- No comments were received this year, so the report is reflecting this fact.
For your review.
Regards
German
From: Rc <rc-bounces@nro.net> on behalf of Martin Hannigan <hannigan@gmail.com>
Date: Thursday, 10 March 2022 at 12:04 pm
To: German Valdez <german@apnic.net>
Cc: rc@nro.net <rc@nro.net>
Subject: Re: [IANA-RC] 2021 IANA Perfomance Matrix Summary Report
Hi German,
Not sure how we want to collaborate, but here's a draft.
- This is a difficult read; I've boiled down somewhat while maintaining original content
- Reduced to 11th grade reading level so far, but still too high for public consumption
- Needs confirmation
-- RIR members
-- URL's are still relevant and active
-- What should we really call this report so that it is clear as to what it is?
- Inserted current matrix; however can we get rid of the white space so it will format better?
Thanks all
Warm regards,
-M<
On Wed, Jan 12, 2022 at 12:27 AM German Valdez <german@apnic.net> wrote:
Dear RC
This is reminder that the 2021 IANA Performance Matrix Summary Report should be ready for review by this committee at the meeting scheduled on Monday 24 January 2022.
Last year Matrix can be found at
https://www.nro.net/wp-content/uploads/2020-RIR-IANA-summary-report.pdf
For this year summary report all information can be found at
https://www.iana.org/performance/numbers
At the last call Martin Hannigan volunteered to draft the first version. I couldn’t find an editable file for this template but I remember John Sweeting sent the 2020 version on pdf.
The purpose is to send a call for public comments before a final report can be drafted by the committee.
As reference last year public call for comments can be found at
https://www.nro.net/call-for-public-comments-on-the-2020-iana-performance-matrix-summary-report/
The secretariat will share an updated version before the 24 January call for your review.
If you need any support from the secretariat just let us know
Regards
German
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