Greg:
One concern: We should not use “encumbrance” in the definition of “Encumbrance”.
Russ
On Aug 10, 2016, at 11:19 AM, Greg Shatan gregshatanipc@gmail.com wrote:
All,
I have a few changes and comments in the attached. Most, if not all, should be noncontroversial. They are marked in track changes on top of Jorge's changes, along with a couple of marginal comments (i.e., appearing in the margin, not necessarily of marginal value).
Greg
On Wed, Aug 10, 2016 at 1:38 AM, Alan Barrett alan.barrett@afrinic.net wrote:
On 10 Aug 2016, at 05:41, Jorge Contreras contreraslegal@att.net wrote:
All – here is a revised version of the Community Agreement reflecting feedback from our Monday call, as well as separate comments received from CWG and IETF. I hope that I have reflected everything accurately, and look forward to discussing any final changes before public release tomorrow.
I have just noticed that the list of domain names in this Community Agreement document includes only iana.com, iana.net, and iana.org, but some other documents included “internetassignednumbersauthority” domain names. I suggest that the lists in all document should be identical.
Alan Barrett
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