I have no significant comments on the attached. A couple of minor notes:
1.1 In each definition of "Affiliate" in the agreements, there is the statement "the Internet Society, a District of Columbia non-profit corporation, is not an affiliate of the IETF Trust." I'm wondering why this needs to be stated; more particularly, does ISOC fit this definition of an "Affiliate" of the IETF Trust, and if so, how? If not, why make the statement?
Many people mistakenly believe that the IETF Trust and IETF/ISOC are Affiliates. They are not, and this clarification is useful for making that point.
I agree. This can be cleaned up.
Agreed.