Thanks, looks good to me as well. The only thing that I wonder is whether the fact that there was earlier work and posting of principal terms should be mentioned. I know from the IETF community side that would probably be helpful context.
Jari
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> Hi,
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> Here's a draft note for the solitication of public comments. Have at it :)
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